Score: 9

"Wow.. I am seriously creeped out"

submission: Never Woke Up

date: April 11, 2007

Wow, this cartoon really chilled me to the marrow. The writing at the top that changed with the tone of the voice was a really nice touch. I honestly can't think of any criticism that wouldn't just be a difference of opinion. Everything from the graphics to the sound creates a perfect gothic atmosphere, and is appropriate for the work. I'm anxious to see what you make next.

Score: 7

"that trick was sick"

submission: The Sickest Trick Ever

date: April 8, 2007

That cartoon was funny as hell. The dialogue was hilarious, as was the concept. Don't spread it too thin though, there's only so many things you can make two stoners do before it becomes hackneyed.

Score: 7

"Interesting"

submission: Spaced Out Ep. 1

date: April 7, 2007

An interesting start. It's a little slow though, and doesn't really start to pick up until the end. Kind of reminds me of the movie "Audition", if you've ever seen it. Anyway, maybe you could add a little slapstick inbetween the punch lines in order to keep the audience's attention. Either that, or liven the dialogue up a little. Otherwise, it was pretty funny, and I'll be looking for the next episode.

Score: 8

"good beat"

submission: Breaks Within Her

date: March 26, 2007

It is a little repetitive, but I think it's got a good rhythm and a catchy progression. Maybe you could bring in a harsher sounding instrument towards the end of the song to mix it up a little bit.